Its good do you mind if i added something.
Here: The crow is silent as if its listening to my anguish for once. Somehow it understands yet stares at me expresionless. I stop my cry and stare back at him, seeing my reflection into his pitch black eyes. Somehow, heh, i saw my twisted soul and laughter escaped upon my lips.
I like it! :D It reminds me of one of my band's songs, "White Crow." I may make a demo video of me playing the bass for it and post it on here.
Ryo: I feel so much right now... it is all whirling in my head. I want to break something.
-Savaris-
Miko!
-Savaris-
Miko!
-Savaris-
Miko!
-Savaris-
Miko!
-Savaris-
Wubwubwubwub~
Miko!
Wubwubwubwub~
-Savaris-
Soul_Dawner
Here: The crow is silent as if its listening to my anguish for once. Somehow it understands yet stares at me expresionless. I stop my cry and stare back at him, seeing my reflection into his pitch black eyes. Somehow, heh, i saw my twisted soul and laughter escaped upon my lips.
Ryo: I feel so much right now... it is all whirling in my head. I want to break something.
Miko!
-Savaris-
Tobimaru
Tobimaru
Tobimaru
ryo456
Ryo: I feel so much right now... it is all whirling in my head. I want to break something.
Tobimaru
Tobimaru
Tobimaru
Miko!
Tobimaru
Soul_Dawner
Soul_Dawner