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Topic: Twisted Soul...Twisted Life
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#1 - on May 21, 2013. 05:42
DemonSpawn



Twisted Soul
No one understands me
I'm always judge as a "freak"
But who are you to judge me?
I don't hate you
And I don't like you
But I rather hate you
Then have a twisted Soul
Twisted Life
My life is nothing but sadness
Nothing but pain,and black blood
Red blood in my world..dosent exist
But all I have are...
My twisted soul...
And my twisted Life
life is difficult yes. But why stop when something comes in your way? In your path of life? Take that problem and smash it! Stomp that problem until it's solved.
Love,Grave-Child
#2 - on May 21, 2013. 11:08
Low



You lost the rythm somewhere in the middle ....or changed it altogether. So, this one is somewhat disappointing read.
#3 - on May 21, 2013. 14:03
fathmathsana



nice poem.
I want to be in the dark,
so no one will underestimate me.
#4 - on May 21, 2013. 22:39
DemonSpawn



Quote by Low
You lost the rythm somewhere in the middle ....or changed it altogether. So, this one is somewhat disappointing read.

I'm not a poem writer so I tried...I'll just stop posting here ^^ I suck anyway
life is difficult yes. But why stop when something comes in your way? In your path of life? Take that problem and smash it! Stomp that problem until it's solved.
Love,Grave-Child
#5 - on May 22, 2013. 15:49
fathmathsana



aww... actually, u r gud at poems.
I want to be in the dark,
so no one will underestimate me.

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