Question: vOTE FOR IT...
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Topic: fire flames.
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#1 - on May 21, 2013. 14:13
fathmathsana
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Making it warmer....
Lightning colors...
Burning desires...
Those are fire flames...
Makes u hot....
Makes u free from cold....
Makes u burn ur thoughts....
Those are fire flames....
Changing everything....
Breaking the relation...
Destroying places...
Those are fire flames..........................................................................
THAT U MADE ME THINK ABOUT!
GIVING SO MUCH PAIN!
WONT EVER TALK TO U
CAUSE U R MY FIRE FLAMES.

HOPE U GUYS LIKE THIS.
LOL! I KNOW IT'S A STUPID POEM
I want to be in the dark,
so no one will underestimate me.
#2 - on May 21, 2013. 16:24
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First look and it looks erratic but the last few lines bring this one together. Good job.
#3 - on May 22, 2013. 15:50
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thankx again dude
I want to be in the dark,
so no one will underestimate me.

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