Question: is this gud?
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Topic: Wishes
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#1 - on May 23, 2013. 22:27
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It was so cold outside....
It became warm when u touched....
We enetered inside the house...
and went out to the balcony...
U were staring at me...
I luked down blushing...
Than up as i saw a shooting star....
I closed my eyes....
Wished for something....
We held our hands nd started dancing...
We came near and near to kiss....
On the same moment i woke up....
Than saw that i was the same nerd.....
I knew that m' life wouldnt change ever...
And these wishes will never come true


I want to be in the dark,
so no one will underestimate me.
#2 - on May 24, 2013. 12:40
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The poem was touchy.
But not true. Dreams do come true
#3 - on May 24, 2013. 13:48
fathmathsana
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excuse me! i know dreams come true. but the girl in this poem was thinking like that no me!
anyways. thankx that it was touchie!
I want to be in the dark,
so no one will underestimate me.

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