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(#1) posted May 24, 2013. - 12:09
Obito303


On a rainy day
alone was i walking down a dark lane
dark it was like the broken heart
with only the streetlights showing me the way
Alone i was
but my mind had you by my side
pushing away the darkness was the beautiful moon
just like that i had you in my heart
pushing away all the sorrows,
and pulling in all the happiness
was i alone ?????????
NO , not anymore
(#2) posted May 24, 2013. - 12:41
Low


Wow. This one is very good. Scorning, but good.
(#3) posted May 24, 2013. - 12:51
Obito303


thnks
low
(#4) posted May 24, 2013. - 13:49
fathmathsana


yeah! that was totally great.
well done dude
I want to be in the dark,
so no one will underestimate me.
(#5) posted May 24, 2013. - 14:02
Obito303


thnks
(#6) posted May 27, 2013. - 17:16
Akatsuki-Deidara


great poem
gud 1
(#7) posted May 27, 2013. - 17:18
Minato321


nico
(#8) posted May 27, 2013. - 17:42
Obito303


thnks frndzz
(#9) posted June 22, 2013. - 15:25
Camer!t


great man
dun come!!
(#10) posted June 22, 2013. - 19:48
Obito303


thnkss

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