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#1 - on May 24, 2013. 12:09
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On a rainy day
alone was i walking down a dark lane
dark it was like the broken heart
with only the streetlights showing me the way
Alone i was
but my mind had you by my side
pushing away the darkness was the beautiful moon
just like that i had you in my heart
pushing away all the sorrows,
and pulling in all the happiness
was i alone ?????????
NO , not anymore
#2 - on May 24, 2013. 12:41
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Wow. This one is very good. Scorning, but good.
#3 - on May 24, 2013. 12:51
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#4 - on May 24, 2013. 13:49
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yeah! that was totally great.
well done dude
I want to be in the dark,
so no one will underestimate me.
#5 - on May 24, 2013. 14:02
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#6 - on May 27, 2013. 17:16
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great poem
gud 1
#7 - on May 27, 2013. 17:18
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#8 - on May 27, 2013. 17:42
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thnks frndzz
#9 - on June 22, 2013. 15:25
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great man
dun come!!
#10 - on June 22, 2013. 19:48
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