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#1 - on January 13, 2014. 09:45
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Obito303
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If I could have just one wish,
I would wish to wake up everyday
to the sound of your breath on my neck,
the warmth of your lips on my cheek,
the touch of your fingers on my skin,
and the feel of your heart beating with mine...
Knowing that I could never find that feeling
with anyone other than you.
#2 - on January 15, 2014. 16:43
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At first, I was expecting a thread that literally asked for our 1 wish. Nice stanzas you have there.
#3 - on January 16, 2014. 15:35
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Wow Obito! That was so Cool! :D
I want to be in the dark,
so no one will underestimate me.
#4 - on January 16, 2014. 18:32
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Very well written. I like it
#5 - on March 4, 2014. 13:04
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Tnk u every1
#6 - on March 5, 2014. 07:12
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Nice poem.
#7 - on March 6, 2014. 02:51
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If I had one wish it would be to take away the pain
The pain I feel every time I hear your name
I gave you all of me and you broke me
This hollowed heart will never be the same
Everything I did, the sacrifices I made, all in vain
Now this heart has so much hate contained
So much hate i cut my veins and let it drain
Drain until its all gone until I feel no pain
Until All that remains is a stain
#8 - on April 1, 2014. 13:14
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Tnks @low and how r u ??been a long time since we have talk
And @veroshi woo hoo cool bro

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