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Topic: Savior
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(#1) posted January 16, 2014. - 15:12
fathmathsana


Thee are the hope of everyone,
Solving the uninvited problems,
Coming through storms, my savior,
Looks after the whole world,
Heroes are fake, people say,
Turning it into a lie, you are the example,
Giving hopes on what you do,
Being the inspiration for what everyone do.

Sorry if this sounds a bit stupid. But this is one of the poem or should I say a sonnet? anyways, this is one of them that I wrote in my literature class yesterday. And since, my teacher commented that it was very good I decided to post this on.

This one's actually, about a savior, a family member savior that always stands for her family in every single problems.

Hope you guys like it.:) -thumbs up-
I want to be in the dark,
so no one will underestimate me.

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