Topic: Complicated or hidden?
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#1 - on January 16, 2014. 15:46
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Middle of the month of May,
You noticed me full with dismay.
In the need of someone like you,
I attached my beliefs within you,
Held me close enough forever,
Made my life so better,
Suddenly, you say we are friends,
Or is this just the end?
Are we complicated through our hearts?
You made the love hidden through the start...<3
I want to be in the dark,
so no one will underestimate me.
#2 - on January 26, 2014. 17:46
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Very creative and beautifully written I like it
#3 - on January 27, 2014. 13:29
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thank you!
so do you think I should make more?
I want to be in the dark,
so no one will underestimate me.
#4 - on January 27, 2014. 15:36
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Yea I enjoy reading them
#5 - on January 28, 2014. 11:15
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thanks! so I guess, i'll try more on these.
I want to be in the dark,
so no one will underestimate me.

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