Topic: Complicated or hidden?
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(#1) posted on January 16, 2014. - 15:46
fathmathsana



Middle of the month of May,
You noticed me full with dismay.
In the need of someone like you,
I attached my beliefs within you,
Held me close enough forever,
Made my life so better,
Suddenly, you say we are friends,
Or is this just the end?
Are we complicated through our hearts?
You made the love hidden through the start...<3
I want to be in the dark,
so no one will underestimate me.
(#2) posted on January 26, 2014. - 17:46
Kabutofan780



Very creative and beautifully written I like it
(#3) posted on January 27, 2014. - 13:29
fathmathsana



thank you!
so do you think I should make more?
I want to be in the dark,
so no one will underestimate me.
(#4) posted on January 27, 2014. - 15:36
Kabutofan780



Yea I enjoy reading them
(#5) posted on January 28, 2014. - 11:15
fathmathsana



thanks! so I guess, i'll try more on these.
I want to be in the dark,
so no one will underestimate me.

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